Thursday, May 9, 2013
The End of the Watermelon
How did the watermelon explode,but why does it crack or split.In my experiment we have to explode but how much preesure can the watermelon hold? Well I have practiced a few times so it should work in order this to happen you got to stick in the needle where the hole is but you turn on the air pump.But once as you are looking CA BOOM!!!! the watermelon just scattered into pieces everywhere but the main thing was that was how(much pressure can the watermelon)hold. Well what I think that it will not work with a small pump so if you get a bigger pump then it will explode everywhere now your project has worked well now since your project has worked you just write conclusion.s
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So how much presure does it hold? Why is it better with an bigger pump? It is good but you need more details.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good project but the paragraph you wrote doesn’t sound right. Like for example the first three sentences, they didn’t make any sense. Also the sentence that says but the main thing was that was how(much pressure can the watermelon) it actually needs to say but the main thing was how ( much pressure can a watermelon) hold.
ReplyDeleteYeah I agree how much pressure did the watermelon hold?
ReplyDeleteIt is a nice Project. But you need to put commas and more information. Explain it carefully it looks like if you were in a rush.
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